Script

Scene 1

Exterior- day time, Abinger Road Bus 

DOMINIC & AARON are sitting at the bus stop on the wall eating fast food from a local London fast food shop in the area whilst wearing their normal daily outfits of hoodies, wooly hats etc. Then they start their daily terrorising of their local neighbourhood, montage showing loads of different little crimes like stealing from corner shops kicking down doors of neighbours gardens and taking their bikes, pushing random people on the street over and take their valubles also being involved with graffiti on local bus stops. Opening titles all coming up simultaneously. Scene ends with AARON & DOMINIC laughing.

Scene 2

Exterior- Evening time - Deserted Park

 This will be edited to be in Black and white. There will be cross cutting between AARON and DOMINIC in the montage of little crimes while the murder takes place at the same time. The murderers identity will be kept anonymous as we film them killing the teenage girl.  Parts of her face will not be shown to withhold the identity of the girl from the audience, as it is not crucial for them to know who she is at this stage of the film. There will be shots of the murderer coming from behind the girl and wrapping his arm around her neck to strangle her as she struggles to escape, then shots of the girl dropping dead onto the floor along with the murderer dragging her across the park.

Scene 3

Interior- Shed

  AARON and DOMINIC’s secret personal shed in the park. After their daily terrorising of their town AARON AND DOMINIC walk to their shed and casually sit down not recognising that there is a dead female body right at their feet that they have had relations with. AARON by accident kicks the body unaware of its presence and him and DOMINIC scream in shock as there is a dead body in their own shed that no one else even knows exists. In panic they both start shouting at each other thinking it’s some sick joke before they establish the fact that they know the girl from their college that they got kicked out of. 

   

          We have tried to include as little dialogue as possible as we do not have the sufficent equipment i.e. microphones, so we included as little dialogue as possible to increase tension in this opening sequence. We have the montage to show the cross cutting between the murder and AARON and DOMINIC's daily routine and to add more suspense to the opening for the audience to then want to watch on and find out why the murder took place.